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Countless Voices

Missing image
A million conversations with a myriad goodbyes
in an empty box of memories, beneath the London skies.
Happy birthdays, deep regrets, romance yet to meet
remembered on graffitied doors, in a lonely city street.

So many years in deepest red, a gateway to the world
where lives, some changed forever, or dreams anew unfurled.
Anxious waiting, new beginnings, friends so far away
countless voices linger, in a street of pictured grey.


       

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Credit: http://marksda1.deviantart.com/art/London-Calling-31997687

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    October 29, 2008

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    You've have captured the life of the red phonebox here! It's sad they are fading from the scene,


  • notorious
    October 25, 2008

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    You didn't make any corrections I mentioned in the former entry you deleted...

    regrets , <==why is there a space between the 's' and the comma? Please fix that, unless it was intentional.

    There are several other instances where there are inconsistent spacings....were those intentional??

    'deams'==>dreams

    Thanks for entering.

    Jessica


  • notorious
    October 24, 2008
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    Why did you delete your entry and post the exact same one?