There was a poor man from Nantucket
Who kept all his wealth in a bucket
'til a chance he did take
Won first prize in sweepstake
No more bucket, far he did chuck it.
In a list
A contest entry
- The Man from Nantucket. CLEAN, ALL AGES!! by HomeGrown.
875 points, ended November 7, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I like it, but it's too cramped. Need some word play to make the structure (great) keep the flow (not so great) Over all, I like the sweepstakes idea. If you've any idea how many ways he spent the money, I'd love to hear about it.
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