This person (or, These people) and I look separate, individual.
We come here to announce:
We are not.
Our quarks have altered their data-broadcast
We are one being with many bodies
One life with many souls.
We have recognized this,
Now we ask the assembled to do so,
and spread the word of our unity,
which itself is a microcosm
of Indra's net.
Our minds are our own,
But our souls are one.
We are quantum waves
crashing against the same shore
in the same series.
Simultaneously,
we are surfing those same waves
together.
This is the official announcement of our karmic party wave.
Author notes
This is to be read as one by both (or all) people announcing their joining. I have no idea if it would work for anyone else, but it's different than the usual. Feel free to use it ... or not. 
A contest entry
- Wedding Vows by Riftkin.
900 points, ended October 31, 2008, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Wedding Vows and other options by HisPrincessMaloka.
400 points, ended February 7, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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It is beautiful, I like it. Definately not something you'd normally hear in a wedding ceremony.
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Crazy wicked cool!
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This is wonderfully written. I love it very much.
Thank you for entering my contest.
Riftkin
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Let's hang ten, baby! W00t! W00t! I think you get the award for originality if nothing more. I love it.
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