Another day
Another month
Another year
Five years past
Time goes oh so fast
It doesn't seem that long ago
That I had to let my friend go.
Author notes
This is about when my best friend moved a long ways away from me.
A contest entry
- Friday night quickies.../ by Sandra R Reynolds.
570 points, ended November 7, 2008, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Good job:
I hope you are able to move on.
Your words are moving.
Very touching poem. -
Beautiful. I liked that it was short - shorter pieces can often be more powerful when you get to the end of them.
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This is great, it's no suprise you won a gold trophy from it.
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This is good.
Maybe it could be longer. But I loved it.
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I wrote it for a contest and there was a word limit so that's why it's short. thanks for the comment though.
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Wow
I love this poem; its meaning is really intense. I've gone through something like this before, and it was interesting seeing it penned so beautifully. Great write; keep up the great work!
♥Taintedsamurai
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Thank you so much. I really appreciate your comment
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yep
funny how moving time stands so still in our memories... love the write most definately worthy of that goldee
~teddybare~
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Friendship are hard to let go of keep in touch. Best to you n the contest
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nice
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Aww.. it's always sad to lose a friend, I hope you still keep in touch
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We keep in touch almost daily. We live over 700 miles apart so it's hard not having her close enoughto visit as easily as I would like to.
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awww you never had to let me go. we may live miles apart but you will always be the best friend ive ever had!
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Aw shucks thanx. Right back at ya babe.
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Beautiful feelings described here...
All the best in the contest!
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Aw, how sad! I like this poem, and I hope you feel better!
Good luck in the contest!
Naoto
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