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Let Go

Another day
Another month
Another year
Five years past
Time goes oh so fast
It doesn't seem that long ago
That I had to let my friend go.

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This is about when my best friend moved a long ways away from me.

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  • Tqop
    March 7
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    Good job:

    I hope you are able to move on.
    Your words are moving.
    Very touching poem.


  • Chainsaw
    January 31

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    Beautiful. I liked that it was short - shorter pieces can often be more powerful when you get to the end of them.


  • Reverend X
    January 26
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    This is great, it's no suprise you won a gold trophy from it.


  • Tqop
    November 29, 2008
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    This is good.

    Maybe it could be longer. But I loved it.


    • CherokeeSiren
      December 6, 2008
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      I wrote it for a contest and there was a word limit so that's why it's short. thanks for the comment though.


  • Dead Lover
    November 26, 2008

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    Wow

    I love this poem; its meaning is really intense. I've gone through something like this before, and it was interesting seeing it penned so beautifully. Great write; keep up the great work!

    ♥Taintedsamurai


  • teddybare gold member
    November 13, 2008

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    yep

    funny how moving time stands so still in our memories... love the write most definately worthy of that goldee

    ~teddybare~


  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    November 2, 2008
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    Friendship are hard to let go of keep in touch. Best to you n the contest

  • Guarrasi
    October 30, 2008
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    nice


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    October 27, 2008
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    Aww.. it's always sad to lose a friend, I hope you still keep in touch

    • CherokeeSiren
      October 28, 2008
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      We keep in touch almost daily. We live over 700 miles apart so it's hard not having her close enoughto visit as easily as I would like to.


  • Lola Lola
    October 25, 2008

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    awww you never had to let me go. we may live miles apart but you will always be the best friend ive ever had!


  • crimsondew
    October 24, 2008
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    Beautiful feelings described here...
    All the best in the contest!


  • Freak-in-BlackJeans
    October 24, 2008

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    Aw, how sad! I like this poem, and I hope you feel better!

    Good luck in the contest!

    Naoto

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