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Vows of Binding

Bound by earthen honor
to fan the flames of our passion
quell the storms of ourlife
breathe joy into our sails
and guard the all of us.

From the harvest
to the spring

Hands bound
let our path begin.

Author notes

marriage vows

the wrapping of the married couples hands during old marriage rituals was a symbolic act of the intertwining of their lifes and souls. Dates back a ways,

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 11, 2008

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    I like this view of the vows that are truly in my eyes to be made to one person, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • Riftkin gold member
    October 31, 2008

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    A love for a Master that binds one to the heart
    is a special gift any Master could ever wish for

    Best luck to you with He that holds you close
    May your Master see your love in these words.

    Riftkin


  • DolceVito gold member
    October 27, 2008

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    Good going here, hoss. Bracelets and rings were also symbols of bondage...buy a female slave, slap a ring on her with your name on it, and she's yours. Women didn't want rings back then; nowadays they insist on getting one...meh!


  • Freak-in-BlackJeans
    October 24, 2008
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    How interesting...

    Good luck in the contest!

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