You'd push your fingers up inside,
a delicate touch you'd apply.
I would always quiver in ecstasy,
as you broke into my body.
You filled my heart and swallowed my mind,
I was yours and you were mine.
Your lips knew how to pull every string,
yet somehow your love was withering.
All threw the lies I still loved you,
In denial I would wish them true.
Romance would surely make things better?
The games you played were not so clever.
Too many tears for each night I cried,
I knew one day I'd say goodbye.
And so I have and I'm waiting to heal,
in my heart you remain still.
Author notes
I've never submitted anything like this before.
So I really hope I don't offend anyone!.
If I do I'm sorry.
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not offensive...in fact, you speak for many. Thank you.
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Really well written - I wasn't offended at all!
Chin up,
Swim.x
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I am offended
The P.C. police have been called and will seize your intarwebz at once -
this is wonderful and I don't think anyone will be offended by it...there isn't any reason.
But this kind of desribes what I'm going through at the moment, but this was amazing. It was erotic in the beginning, but there was a twist in the end
this was great!
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wow this is awesome!
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lol
love it... its great
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I love it!!!
This is amazing!!!!
Great job hun ♥
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