I’ve gotta tell you something, but I don’t know if I should
I’ve gotta tell you something…
There’s something you’ve never quite understood…
This may take a while….so just sit right there
Look deep within my soul
And you’ll find yourself…. right there
I’m trying to fight these feelings and tell myself that you’re only a crush
That I’ll get over it soon…
That there’s no need to rush
I can’t help it….because it seems like I’ve known you for years
It’s the way you tell me you’ll always be there
The way you know my deepest fears
I’ve never met anyone like you, you’re one of a kind
Please say you’ll always be here
Promise me till the end of time
Everything’s changing, nothings what it seems
I can’t stop thinking about you….
I can’t control my dreams…
I’m so confused *sighs* words can’t even describe
I think….. I love you…
Please look me in the eyes
When we’re together you make me feel like I’m number one; the best
I wish that were true….
The truth……I’ve only fallen for you
……just like the rest……..
Author notes
confused....
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Know the feeling...and you convey it with force. The rhyme adds authenticity to the words, and even if I know what was happening, the suspense still made my heart ring with memories...esp:
'I can’t help it….because it seems like I’ve known you for years
It’s the way you tell me you’ll always be there
The way you know my deepest fears
I’ve never met anyone like you, you’re one of a kind
Please say you’ll always be here
Promise me till the end of time'
I guess it's a sign you're not so confused after all..
Anyway nice flow all throughout, and very focussed yet tinged with uncertainty.
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wow.... youre an amazing writer.... thats all there is to it.... the words flow so vividly.... keep up the amazing work.
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