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Possessed

when my soul
is corrupted
by the gods
i can't see what is
becoming of my remains
and i will take all of your pain
and relinquish it

for this final decision
i bring you all you need to know
in this final blow
i bring you all you need to know

in this cryptyic decision
i will place upon your deranged mind
if we can't compensate
we will not find
that in the end
we cannot runaway from lies

is this what you want
because i will not let you have it all
so what if you torment me
with your eyes
i see the fire inside
so what if you hate me
for what i am
who i am
just live with it if you can

your not even making sense
so why should i care?
because you don't want to hear the truth
you evil demon
you can't possess my soul
no not anymore
anymore....

if you don't want to see what i see
if you don't want to feel what i feel
and if you don't want to stay
it's fine with me just go away
and stay where you belong
because theres no more room for you
i've found a new body
and you can't try to take me over
because of your hatred
i've grown stronger
and i will
seal your fate
seal your
seal.....
your.....
fate......

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  • Amarillistarshot silver member
    October 26, 2008

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    powerful!

    Great job, hubby! Overcoming inner demons is always a tough trial, and this write shows that you have done so with style. Great write, with a powerful finish.