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Some thoughts of a 'live alone' man.

Perhaps today's the day
to set things right,
to make my bed,
before tonight,

to wash the dishes;
launder my shirt;
to find a duster,
clean up the dirt;

take out the papers;
pull up some weeds;
do all those things
a 'home beautiful' needs.

But why should I alter
my 'live-alone' ways?
I've clean dishes and clothes
for a few more days.

Why should I worry,
get my mind in a stew,
when there are so many things
I'd much rather do?

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  • Dorick
    November 7, 2008
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    My brother's very much like this, he goes, why should I have to go get a girlfriend?

  • Mickie27
    November 6, 2008

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    very interesting precisely why should you worry? Being alone isn't anything to be ashamed about. This is a good choice for winning.

  • Seaquince
    October 25, 2008

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    this is good... hmm seeing you a male... and do so much... u wanna marry me, cause i have a helva lot that needs doing here ...lol

  • Judith Chandler
    October 25, 2008

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    This makes me smile. I've gone through that dilemma a few times - "to clean or not to clean". Doesn't sound like it's a problem for you!

    I like your rhymes and flow. Thank you for entering.

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