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World Of Darkness

corruption and greed
my unwanted needs
to bring down the crooks
and take them down by the books

no matter
who i am
what i do
it's my life
and i do what i choose
protect the innocent
slay the criminals

their blood is my blood
and we share this unlucky fate
when my family was shot down
it opened this world of hate

i tried to consume my rage
but it ended up turning on me
and now i look and see
all the scars residing in me

even if they don't agree
even if they hate me too
i will be their to strike fear
into the hearts of those that kill

i am the punisher
and my life is nothing as it seems
past all of this hateful vengance
lies a decent man in me

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  • DeathlyAngel
    October 27, 2008
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    another good write hun, great job, i like this one aswell


  • Beauty Of Silence
    October 25, 2008

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    ohmygosh!

    this is a pretty dark write. it was painful to read this, and your imagery here was intense. keep penning