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Win The Wind

tug a war.  her basket
inheld of precious
rare tulips
  with the wind
her little arms questioning
"let go now?"









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  • mysticstorm gold member
    October 25, 2008

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    This is WOW! very creative and beautiful, but I have lost how it relates to the prompt at all...really a beautiful write...I love the metaphor and imagery and the sweet last line...lovely work...
    best,
    mystic