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The Way to Church !








































                       












                          The  way to Church

w. peter sanci oct. 24 / 2008


I really like this picture as well.
The night sky  is full of many,
many stars, casting it’s magical spell.
The peace and quiet all around. seems to make one relax and listen for a sound.
The way to church is a very good name for this picture.
You can see the church  at the top of the hill.
Looking up at it always gives me a thrill.
You can see the tops of the magicians hats.
They are walking silently up to the church like bats.
When they get there, they are going to offer up prayers.
That will light up the nigh sky just like many flares.
So my friends, you all can see clearly why,
This picture is titled, the way  to  church, to walk up to it my friends you definitely have to be spry.


























                       












                           

                                The  way to Church

w. peter sanci oct. 24 / 2008


I really like this picture as well.
The night sky  is full of many,
many stars, casting it’s magical spell.
The peace and quiet all around. seems to make one relax and listen for a sound.
The way to church is a very good name for this picture.
You can see the church  at the top of the hill.
Looking up at it always gives me a thrill.
You can see the tops of the magicians hats.
They are walking silently up to the church like bats.
When they get there, they are going to offer up prayers.
That will light up the nigh sky just like many flares.
So my friends, you all can see clearly why,
This picture is titled, the way  to  church, to walk up to it my friends you definitely have to be spry.

Author notes

I really enjoy doin these picture promts!! It forces em ot go out side of my regular way of thinkng and try something different! I hope you liek my little poem.

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  • Sandygram
    November 8, 2008

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    A lovely poem you have penned. Thank you for entering and best of luck in the contest. This was a pleasure to read. Take care, Sandy

    • Pietro456
      January 27
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      Sandy !

      Thanks so much for you're kind words about my poem. But as my grade 7 teacher Br. Lomod always said," Write what's n you'e head and in you're hert and you'll never go wrong." and he was so right.

    • Pietro456
      December 29, 2008
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      Sandy!

      Wow Profound am I ! Thanks a lot for you're very kind words. You are very specila to me.

    • Pietro456
      December 29, 2008
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      Sandy

      Why thanks so much ! As you know I only wriet what's in my heart and in my head. And that's the gospell turth ! You can't go wrong if you do that.

    • Pietro456
      December 20, 2008
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      Sandy

      Why thanks so much for you're lovely comments on my poem. I appreciaate them so very much,

    • Pietro456
      December 20, 2008
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      Sandy.

    • Pietro456
      November 9, 2008
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      Sandy !

      You say the nicest things ! Thanks so much. I think I have have gotten my muse back.Ha ,,ha,ha.I have even gone back to Church,

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