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The Other Cheek

hate is a form of suicide,

I'm sorry I killed us both.

A contest entry

criticm welcome.

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    November 15, 2008

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    damn this poem was really good it struck a great nerve and make one think i think you really did a awesome job with this good luck to you in the contest


  • Shakes-spear
    November 12, 2008

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    ouch

    To hate someone is really hard for me. I dislike things they do,. but hate is just hard! Good luck in the contest! The Shaker

  • The Jigsaw Poet
    October 24, 2008

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    Yes sis, I agree with the enchantress this is really hard-hittin for such a short piece, I wudnt be able to write on so short and yet so good I think. Another amazing write sis


  • xrain dancerx
    October 24, 2008

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    oh!!!! so short but its full of emotion! my heart like just dropped when i read this. lolz. i dont think any poem this short has ever done that to me. wonderful job!
    ur friend,
    Dark Enchantress.