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Dead Karma

 

 

The lovers make the babies make the people make the rulers, so
The future of all humans is infected with what they know.
The mercy of the squeamish drowns the screaming of the skilled
Until the meaning of perception by its own device is killed.


The foolish watch in mirrors yet they “know” what’s left and right,
The genius ever-changing view fills even him with fright,
The man trapped in the middle feels his being torn in two,
While the prophets say a dead man is the one who knows the truth.


You’ll find me in the meadow dancing naked through the flowers
As the sun shines and the wind blows ‘neath the warmth of summer showers.
If you want me I will be there ever waiting for your call.
But the phone rings and I wake up and it wasn’t real at all.



The ego makes the answers makes the reasons make the questions so
The whole of human knowledge is a fanciful placebo.
The mantle worn by experts changes nothing but their look
And yet the pomp and ceremony for cognition is mistook.


The foolish love the pageantry and dwell upon the sight,
The genius wants to run away bids everyone goodnight,
The man trapped in the middle panics looking for a door,
As the prophets say a dead man is the one who knows the score.


You’ll find me on a sailboat chasing mermaids in the twilight
As the dolphins and the sperm whales do a dance that’s very child-like.
If you want me I will be there o’er the rail to steal a kiss.
The alarm rings and I wake up and it hurts to take a piss.



The users make the market makes the product makes the users so
The heads of the exploiters are adorned with golden halos.
The need from the addiction drives the heart to great excess
Until a fat and happy demon is the measure of success.


The foolish wish their demons were all fat and happy, too,
The genius wipes the demon's mark from everything he’ll do,
The man trapped in the middle feels a pressure in his brain,
As the prophets say a dead man is the one who cures the pain.

You’ll find me in my bedroom hiding frightened ‘neath the covers
Praying wildly for existence of imaginary lovers.
If you want me I will be there with a love that’s strong and true.
But the world will kill my karma and I don’t know what to do.
 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • HaleyMary
    October 24, 2008

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    Thought provoking write, Allan. I really like the title of this and the last line. It seemed metaphorical, like the law of karma not exactly being killed off, but karma working in such a way that brings bad things into one's life. Hope you find that meaning of life somewhere at some time and hope good karma comes along with that meaning. Keep writing.


  • DolceVito gold member
    October 24, 2008
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    Excellent

    Another fine write, deserving


  • echo-ink
    October 24, 2008

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    HUMM~~~~

    Very in-ter-es-ting.

    and, of course awesome, as always.

    I loved the beat...it read like a drum beat, the whole way through, I think if I read this while listening to a good ole beat, I would be even more amazed, the only thing I might disagree on is...
    the dead man ain't dead anymore.

    Everything about this amazed me, the rhyme, meter, flow, the humor and the wisdom was funnily meaningful.

    fantastic job, loved it.

    Bell


  • HekatesMinion
    October 24, 2008

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    amazing

    Our doing is our undoing, and the only way forward is back, so what is one to do when we all end up caught in the middle, and at some point we all do. To make real what is imagined, and to fantasize our reality until there is nothing left of sense around us. That is what makes us so painfully and vulnerably human. This was well spoken, and beautiful. I enjoyed it. Three bunny rabbit ears for you, and two thumbs up.


    • PerVirtuous
      October 24, 2008
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      You sound like T.S. Elliot, "My end is my beginning, my beginning is my end..." in Burnt Norton. (one of the best poems ever written!) Thanks for the words of encouragement.

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