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Winter's Kiss

 

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Whispering snowflakes fall,

kissing his soft lips

as they tremble...

...for my touch.

 

 

 

 

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  • Swan song gold member
    October 27, 2008
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    wow this felt likt a feather stumming the countors of my heart!


  • going nowhere
    October 25, 2008
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    that last line made me tremble... for snow. beautifully done. thank you


  • Beautiful-N-Broken silver member
    October 24, 2008
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    aww...so sweet, i really like this.