Darling won’t you take my hand,
to share all our dreams in life
all your words on wings kiss my ears,
I would be honored love to have you as my wife.
Walk this road of love beside me,
my partner my equal you shall always be,
my best friend born upon this Earth,
I shall never diminish your holy worth.
Though the trail of life may be rough,
this love of mine shall never fade away.
as my soul shall blend with yours,
in all the actions of my love everyday
Share with me the sweetness of life’s breath,
and every precious moment till our death,
I shall take care of you in sickness or health,
I shall love you equally through poverty or wealth
Take me as I am but a simple man,
I promise to provide for you all the love I can,
the wisdom of our souls shall guide the way,
beside you my love, is where I shall always stay
Author notes
Wedding Vows
A contest entry
- Wedding Vows by Riftkin.
900 points, ended October 31, 2008, 18 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Soul mates, life mates and you hold my love.
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this was amazing work you did such a wonderfull job of placing your emotions in words without over doing it and making it look forced great job my friend and congrats on the gold
Lucian"
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Hey congratulations my friend.. Your poem is brilliant, I'm lucky to be able to stand in the winners line along with your poem..
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I love this, as it touches my heart, for love goes beyond the simple things, but to the very soul of those that are in love. Thank you for entering my contest.
Riftkin
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This is absolutely priceless! I can completely understand the love felt in this it is the same I feel for my soul mate that's why I decided to enter as well. I hope you do well in the contest because this is definitely a winner and I am happy to hear about your soul mate.
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Meaningful, succinct and it rhymes. Good work.
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