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Autumn Beckons

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Crisp winds echo
a chill in the air
Leaves plummet fall
so many colors to share

Majestic backdrop
meets the evening sky
Autumn moon descends
as the brilliant stars reply







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  • WolfHeart
    November 24, 2008

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    Beautiful and lyrical. A very nice entry, and I wish you the best of luck in the contest. I love autumn, the colors and smells. . . nice work, Poet.


    • tawk gold member
      November 24, 2008
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      Thanks Mom for your wonderful comments I love you so much. hugs Theresa


  • Ellis gold member
    November 12, 2008
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    Lovely Poem


  • The Fun House silver member
    November 2, 2008

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    This flows just beautifully. It reads aloud very well and I can feel autumn emanating here. A most excellent poem


  • moonbumps silver member
    October 26, 2008

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    Smashin little write about Autumn that says it all-
    xxx Hilly


  • thejollytinker
    October 24, 2008
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    Good work in few words- loved the last two lines. and what a beautiful border! Thanks- G

  • WolfHeart
    October 24, 2008
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    Lovely

    Fall is my favorite season and you have really done it justice in this poem.
    "Leaves plummet fall
    so many colors to share"
    These are my favorite lines as I think of the colors
    painting the sidewalk and the grass. Well done, Poet


  • crimsondew
    October 24, 2008

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    A truly splendid poem...such rich imagery here....Thoroughly enjoyed reading this...
    All the best in the contest!


  • Katie Lazette
    October 24, 2008
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    Lovely poem tawk. Good luck in the contest.

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    October 24, 2008

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    I love this Autumn is my favorite time of the year good luck to you in the contest best wishes always be well

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