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Can This Be Love?

I allow my thoughts to wander
But they always come back to you
I think of you and smile
Just like I always do
When you're there, I wanna say the right things
Whatever makes you smile
When your not, Im missing, worrying, thinking
About you all the while
And I dream of us together
The blissful fantasy
Together, happy, forever
And nothing else matters to me
            Can this be love?

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simple, i guess

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  • DreamerA
    November 9, 2008
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    i think the answer is yes lol! brilliant really enjoyed this. thanks for entering n good luck xx


  • DawnKestrel
    November 4, 2008

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    This is really nice.
    Good luck in my contest.


  • Scared Silly
    October 25, 2008
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    see u both came up with something for the contest lol


  • Beauty Of Silence
    October 25, 2008

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    aww this is sooo sweet, and yeap, this is love! i've felt these things before. awesome write, you've expressed it so well! keep penning

  • DreamerA
    October 25, 2008

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    Great

    I loved the simplicity, you didn't need to say anymore "the blissful fantasy" amazing. Brilliant work. Good luck and thanks for entering xx


  • xrain dancerx
    October 24, 2008

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    oh...wow.... i loved it baby. and i think u know y.
    *hugs and kisses* ur tay.

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