Pinned up against the wall
knees weak
trying not to fall
nipples caressed by fingertips
gently kissed
with soft full lips
hand sliding inside
warm and wet
enjoying the ride
juicier still running down my leg
teasing my body
making me beg
What did you think
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Ok lass,
i may need a smoke.....
One of the best hot little pieces of poetry i have read here.
I will try to stand now without falling.....lol
If i tumble you may throw yourself beneath me ....
Great job little gypsy.
Lowell Poe
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It's amazing what a helping hand can do!
The descriptions are penetrating (excuse the pun) and provocative. It is unusual for me to make such comments. However, you write sensual prose that provokes intensely wonderful sentiments, let alone lovely memories. -
I like the way you think
Very sensual and well writen. the way you write realy turns me on.
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lusciously sweet
sexy and sweet these lines with sensual effects with fulfilling tones,,,wonderfully written sweetie,,and Thank you for the comment upon my words,,,blessings of light,life,laughterand love...Firestorm
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like a strong drink this poem hits you and makes you lose most of your will, you mind goes some where else. keep it flowing
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'Pinned up against the wall'
my favorite position
'knees weak'
you'll be compensated for that
'tryingnot to fall'
Don't worry...if you fall, I'll rideyou
'nipples caressed byfingers'
lustful!
'gently kisses
withsoft full lips'
you must be tasted, honey!
'juices still running down my leg'
keep your juices flowing, my love!
'teasing my body'
for making the most of it, my doll!
'making me beg'
the more you beg, the more you will have...
'hand sliding inside'
best use of hands and fingers
'warm and wet'
how 'pleasureful'!
'enjoying the ride'
Yes, that's the best I ever had
Brilliant!
You're a wonderful babe, cutie!
Wet, sinful kisses...all over your pleasure zones!
Galaxy2
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Loved the sensual erotic tone here. You have some real good talent, keep it up.
**Master Ktulu** -
Very...very...nice
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