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Autumn (Acrostic)

Autumn wears its russet coat

Unlimited pumkin pie for all

Tumbling, fluttering leaves that fall

Upon the dark and cooling earth

Melancholy poppies dance in fields of corn

Nature's bounty to be gathered in

 

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  • The Fun House silver member
    November 2, 2008

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    This is a great acrostic, I do like the double word action here and I am diggin the pumpkin pie. May I have a slice please? Great job.