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Brother

I found you my brother, lost in a world of lies
And I gave you my light to carry in a dark world
And you took it in your hands and held it aloft
To light the way for others to see

My spiritual brother, surrounded by ignorance
You shone like a bright diamond
And within the shadow of the moon
You grew from man to God

The light calls unto you my spiritual brother
To rise from the heart of the Earth
And look at the light that truly loves you
For she shines for you to see

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  • Glasyalabolas
    November 2, 2008

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    I like the warmth in this piece, the hope. I also like that it is written in such a way that you can interpret it in different ways.

    Good write.