Again the curse has struck
Another foolish heart rent
Through the course of ill luck
The truth was gnarled and bent
The vain, betrayed by the vain
Shall blast tirades of discord
"They're all the same, vile & insane"
With the cruel, the devoted are abhorred
Such is natures anathemous ploy
Thy gender but a conduit of sins
Yet if all but taint and destroy
Why don't you man haters become lesbians
Dedicated to all those who choose to judge the hearts of many based on the flesh of a few.
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alright alright, point taken. very well written
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lmfao... lovely... and the ending.. just yes... ahah! so crispy! LOL thats what came to me.. i loved it...
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Crispy?
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lmfao... i knew you were going to catch that,.,,, but thats to do with so many different things (haha) ... yes CRISPY
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Well,I read this again.I know I'd read that months ago,but didn't understand it at that time.I agree with you and my fav is the last line and the last stanza. It's like one gets to meet only idiots ,bastards and looses all hopes that sb nice will come.That's why,when I was in high school I used to call them "cani"meaning "dogs" in english.Offensive I know,but they deserved it.The same thing happens with dogs...since that awful experience when I was 6 I'm afraid of dogs,even puppies and can't even touch one.That's the way human mind works.Anyway the last line got stuck in my head...
True we're equally bastards,idiots and much more.Cause I believe in "gender equality"----
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It's always nice to know that somebody agrees with me, and that we should all hate each other equally
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wow
i love the rhythm and i love the power of it and it is really strong. I really enjoyed reading it and loved the lines
"They're all the same, vile & insane"
With the cruel, the devoted are abhorred
They are amazing and are really strong for me
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Thanks, glad you enjoyed it
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rhythmic, loud
full of extreme description
emotion felt strong
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Wow, this one gets read twice in one day, and by two ladies who don't find it offensive.
I must be going to get hit by a bus today or lose my house keys!
Anyhell, thanks for reading, commenting and applauding
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The vain, betrayed by the vain
Shall blast tirades of discord
"They're all the same, vile & insane"
With the cruel, the devoted are abhorred
Holy Pope Shit
I Love You for that
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Holy Pope Shit......i'd hate to be the one getting baptized on that day!
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hahahahahahahahahha hey now that is just plain freakin funny. I love men personally. They just know how to push all the wrong buttons at the wrong times.
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Pushing buttons is a trait all of us opposible thumbed monkies, and not limited to wheather we stand upright or squat when we piss.
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I totally agree with the feeling in your author's note! Which I guess relates to the last line of the last verse.
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Yeah, this piece was wrote out of total frustration and bitterness actually.
Long, boring, cliched story.
Thanks for the read, and the comments
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Love your use of words through this piece, not to mention the rhyming part. Nicely dark and vivid.
Great write
NS
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Thanks for reading and complementing with a comment
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i know you hate mankind but dont you think turning gay is going a little too far? 
love you always
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Well that last line comes from me now and then hearing girls say "Im so tired of men.I think im going to switch teams", so I figured I might as well incorperate that line to express my bitter felt feelings on the whole previous poems worth of the subject
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don't tempt me, ha.
sucks that people are by nature judgemental (not just gender haters)
sometimes it seems as if we will always be persecuted for one reason or another... bummer.
speaking of judging, I deem you rather spiff
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A species of hypocritical haters and emotional maelstroms we be.
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I think that is why I'd rather sit this round out.
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So well put, more good poetry, it looks as though all the comments are in agreement
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the last line made me laugh...i really liked it ! its so sad to know that there are ppl like this out there! so very sad. thanks my friend for sharing this with me
Juilet
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Thanks again.
And the last line is supposed to be funny, unless you are one of the little bitter immature people that this piece i directed to.
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my favorite would have to be the first stanza and least favorite none. None of the areas are awkward unless you have no idea what the words mean in the last stanza
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Well that is the purpose of the last line.
To let all be laid out so the point of the messege is clear.
(as bitter angerous sounding as it may appear to sound)
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lol
sorry but that last line made me laugh
and kinda sounded as a bit of a rant
but it flowed together nicely
i feel all people who are typically the same, seem to stab one another in the back for the most part cause its just too painful to see someone so much like yourself especially if that person too is so willing to be so hurful, ...paranoia...
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It's supposed to be funny to someone like us, who find every little reason to shit on people for their vain, petty, shallow and selfish faults.
Because the last line is poking fun at these people who don't realize their brash generalizations are no better than hypocritical bigotry.
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Your poetry is great and i mean it.Even after reading it twice I wasn't able to understand all of it ,but it's good . You really deserve much more then Ap can offer .You really deserve to get published.
I think the last line is quite interesting.
~Feb~
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The last line is what the entire piece is about.
Females who think all males are shit because they choose one loser to fall in love with and let treat them like crap, then take it upon themselves to pass judgement on and decree that males are just stupid, evil sex monsters who cannot love.
We are all equally cynical bastards seething with selfish humanisms.
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