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Little Wings

Flickering glow
lighting up the ebony sky
Tiny stars
dancing through the trees
Little angels
playing amongst nature
Little wings
glowing brightly
Breathing life
into the darkness of night
Shiny spirits
brightening my soul

Author notes

fireflies

A contest entry

Struggling to find my muse lately :(

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  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    October 25, 2008

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    Not struggling to find a muse in this piece, you have written such a brilliant piece. Best to you in the contest


    • buffsab99
      October 25, 2008
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      Thank you

      Thank you so much for your kind words. Funny how some pieces just flow together and some I struggle badly on.


  • RandyDR
    October 24, 2008
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    Ah it is a nice write, good luck in your contest.


    • buffsab99
      October 24, 2008
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      Thank you

      Thank you, my muse has been sleeping lately so trying to get it going again