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Summer on the beach

Time to write some poetry in the sun. I find the beach a great inspiration. Especially in the early morning before the rain clouds lift.

A contest entry

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  • Symphony
    November 6, 2008

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    Very pretty; reminds me of a crisp Winter's morning on the beach - great job and best wishes in the contest witht his one


  • dustytiger
    October 28, 2008

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    short and beautiful, wow it's amazing how powerful this is with so few words, i just love it, good luck in the contest


  • February Moon gold member
    October 24, 2008
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    This is very pretty.


  • DolceVito gold member
    October 24, 2008
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    Cool...

    ...Makes me want to be there


  • Freak-in-BlackJeans
    October 24, 2008

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    That is so pretty! I painted something like this in art class last year! I got an A+

    Good luck in the contest!

    Naoto

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