Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Another Day

Gold and russet autumn leaves
flutter gently in the breeze
trees stripped bare of foilage splendour
stark and bleak in their surrendour

Dewy grass upon the ground
rain falling softly, starts to pound
on the grey and dismal streets
soaking everything it meets

Icy tendrils curl and twist
mingle in the early mist
bitter wind upon it's way
wake up - it's another day

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

  • moldie
    November 18, 2008
    Edit | Reply

    very good

    really like this..its raing here and it sums it up for me..well done debz


  • NurseChilly gold member
    October 24, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    ohh this is so now.. so autumnal and perfectly poised on our hearts and minds...

    Debs, this is lovely...