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Prayers

I bowed my head
and clasped my hands together
and prayed to God
that he could make it better

I dedicated each part
to someone special i knew
I prayed for mommy and daddy
and the bills that were due

I prayed for the people
that were sick
and couldn't obtain help
I prayed for the people
who couldn't help themselves

My prayers will reach God
I trust in him well
I know he would catch me
if ever I fell

Amen
Thank you Jehovah
for you undeserved kindness
and may your blessings
ALWAYS continue to find us

I was at church the other day,and the Brother was giving a talk about praying..Imediatly i got inspired of course,and so i just let the words flow off my pen and came up with this.

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  • condor gold member
    November 10, 2008

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    I thought this was a beautiful write. A prayer for everyone you write from the heart. Inspired by a brothers reading. That is special. I loved your setout and your rhyme. The flow just right. Congrats, mate.


  • Whispering-Night
    October 24, 2008
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    Hope you enjoy