Torn and tattered
unable to stand
I lay my head
down for the night
Knowing tomorrow
you will be there for me
To pull me together
make me whole again
Author notes
Falling Apart At The Seams, Please Mend Daily
A contest entry
- Prompt Contest 10 entries 40 words or less #23 by mysticstorm.
650 points, ended October 25, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Struggling to find my muse lately :(
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Beautiful! We all need a helping hand once in a while and someone to help us hold that thread...well said in soft flow and loving meaning...thank you!
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Thank you
Thank you for HM and your wonderful comment
Yes we all do need a hand from time to time
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This is so pretty, so true, I can relate to this so much!
Good luck in the contest!
Naoto
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Thank you
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No probs. =]
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