What am I doing?
Oh no this was a bad idea!
Water splashes on rocks spraying a glowing rainbow mist.
It looks so happy
Almost like I can fly down on the back of the rainbow.
But Oh NO!
The sudden drops send my heart flying to my throat and back down to my stomach.
Paddle Paddle Paddle SPLASH!
I roll in the small calm.
Almost there! Almost done!
Here comes land.
Hey that was kinda fun!
Author notes
I have been rafting and kayaking on the Snake River. I was up near Bliss though. I have a terrible fear of water and this is what went through my mind while on the trip. I haven't been to Idaho Falls yet maybe I will check them out when I go visit my friend who just moved up. It sounds like fun!
What did you think?
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A refreshing trip it was indeed...good luck in the contest
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While reading this I thought of being on a log flume ride @ Disney. I am not a big water person, so log flumming is as adventurous as I can get. Point being, the picture you painted fits in perfectly with what I imagined and your author notes. I'm rambling. Nice job!
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haha! i love it. i could almost feel the cool water splashing on my face. a very fun write.
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I like rapidity of this, all of your thoughts running as quickly as the change in your emotions from fear, to that hey this is kinda fun, to the phew its over at the end. it says age adult, but i could feel the child-like enthusiam through this whole thing
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nice write! made me laugh!
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This is very fun! It made my heart jump with joy!!
Good luck in the contest!
Naoto
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