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Lesser of Two Evils

 

 

 

Starvation

To the population
Cast your vote
But there's no antidote

 

 

 

 

 

 

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OH i will be voting. unfortunatly there isnt an option 3


i sat on a pumkin pie

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    January 2

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    No there certainly isn't, but what can we do... If we don't vote, someone else will do and they'll cast one of the buggars to lead us.


  • Maxboy gold member
    October 31, 2008
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    You make a very good point and like you say, to bad there isn't an option 3.

    Very Good


  • Nostalgia
    October 28, 2008

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    Very short and very catchy and very true, It just seems that this piece doesn't fit into either catigory. Lol. But I really enjoy it anyway, we'll see. Very nice direct piece. Thanks.

  • Judith Chandler
    October 27, 2008
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    So you think it doesn't make any difference whether you vote or not? Maybe you're right.

  • Kitch
    October 24, 2008

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    awsome

    this is really good and you are right there isn't an antidote. The rhyme is really effective and strengthens the point you are putting accross

    good luck!

    x


  • Shakes-spear
    October 24, 2008

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    Ouch

    Could be a lot of truth in these words. Seems to be who can lie the best! Your choice but who is the real looser? The Shaker

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