Vilest of creatures
Your stench
Of betrayal reeks
So crawl back
Into your hole
Where garbage should be
A contest entry
- Are You Up For A Mean Ass Quickie? by theredcatjazzoflove.
700 points, ended November 15, 2008, 25 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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and put the lid back on the can!
Wow this person I do not want to meet! Good luck in the contest! The Shaker
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Shaker the scary part about her is that she has this very sweet demeanor, but its the real person that lies beneath that is so lousy. You are right though about not meeting her. Pain follows her wherever she goes. Thanks for the comment and visit!
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wow!
your stench of betrayal reeks...strong pungent words, yet words that hold anger and hurt...excellent and winner for sure
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This poem expresses hate in a very common way. Although something about how your wrote it seems very different. It's a very good write. ~Hollis
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damn! your mean this is a really good poem hon its so insulting a mean thankks for this entry
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