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Feudal Floundering

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Her love is a mystical castle,
cold stone in logistical hassle,
sweet lip shimmered moat
that could swallow my throat,
when her charms row like chains on a vassal.






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  • poet2angels gold member
    October 24, 2008

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    Clever and beautifully done as always, my dear friend!

    Lynda