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Tram Sequence

Two hundred twenty thousand
Volts surge and crackle
In the wire
Inches away
Too far above
The ground

Gliding

Author notes

Chapter 23. In the fantasy world in my book, certain people use small devices called trams to ride on high-voltage power lines, dangling above vast spaces much as if they were on a ski lift.

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  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    November 2, 2008

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    Welcome to Allpoetry

    Interesting. It was quite effective really, to almost feel the crackle of electricity charge through my skin..

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  • Freak-in-BlackJeans
    October 24, 2008

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    Sounds interesting. Maybe I'll check out the other 22!

    Naoto