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[ I'm so close to death ]

I'm so close to death
But life is holding me so close
And I'm just so confused
Everything is changing
Everyone is changing

And I've cried here for hours
Just to ask god the question
Does this deafening silence mean
Nothing to no one but me

These lies your spouting
Are just as twisted as your
Broken heart
And nothing can bring
Back everything
Like it was before

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  • meggie94x
    October 24, 2008
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    half is lyrics though lol. but good


  • xDemonicxAngelx
    October 24, 2008

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    This is really sad. I can really relate to the first stanza though, but unfortunately things change, whether we want them to or not. I thought that this was really well written. I hope that things get better for you soon.

    Take care