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Stacey >:)

There was a young girl called stace,
Whos arms flopped all over the place.
I screamed "there's a spider!",
She looked right behind her,
And ended up flat on her face.

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  • Topnotchsy
    October 24, 2008

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    This is a cute write (and based on the comments a funny true story.) Can't go wrong with a limerick for a humorous piece, that's for sure.


  • xDemonicxAngelx
    October 24, 2008

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    LOL!
    -.-
    I remember this day well. And I nearly fell flat on my face, but my leg spazzed and saved me.
    You should write another one. I love reading these!

    xxx
    <3

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