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All Hallows Eve (A work in progress)

Tis the witching season

The most sacred night of all

Is when the witches and the wizards

Attend All Hallows Ball



The hags they are replendant

In green encrusted slime

Dancing with the warlocks

When the midnight hour doth chime



They hasten to their broomsticks

And take off to the skies

With a cacophony of cackles

They go to claim their prize



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  • The Black Iris
    October 24, 2008
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    This is a very promising piece, the flow is good and the rhyme scheme works well. Keep it up.