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Oils and Love





Sweet dew drop kisses
wet my loves palette.
Tasty breath come glazed
upon thy cordial canvas.

Brazening artist
administers brush strokes that tease.
Again and again
abstract love comes to focus.

Oils on cloth
soft flesh hues on muse.
Textured rhythm of sequence,

flush motion perfection.

 

 

 

 

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  • daffodilblossom
    October 20
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    i enjoyed this

    very captive write on art


  • soulfultia gold member
    December 30, 2008

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    A strong and expressive penning from you! Executed with that creative touch I've seen time and time again! Excellent, congrats on the Silver!! ~Tia


  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    October 26, 2008

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    wonderfully written my friend, love the vocab usage and how the tone flows softly [though some punctuation would have helped the flow a bit more], and wonderful imagery i can almost see the coloured brushstrokes!
    thanks so much for taking the time to enter,

    Tasha


  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    October 24, 2008
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    can't wait

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