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There's no other way...

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There’s no other way, you
so incredibly sweet,
like the muse of my dreams,
a vision of heavenly bliss…
unknown in lives complexity
but existing through you
 
Showing me the simplicity
of being loved for real
with no hesitation in believing
there’s just no other way…

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

I had a hard time writing this but hope the Twinnie likes it....

Choose:
[.1.] Exerpt from Pablo Neruda's Sonnet XVII

"I love you without knowing how, or when, or from where.
I love you straightforwardly, without complexities or pride;
so I love you because I know no other way

than this: where I does not exist, nor you,
so close that your hand on my chest is my hand,
so close that your eyes close as I fall asleep."

A contest entry

There's just no other way to love you...

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Comments


  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    November 6, 2008

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    beautiful twinny
    thanks so much for finding time to enter this contest of mine

    love you
    Tasha


  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    October 24, 2008
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    i will extend it if needed no worries I want as many faves in as poss


    • Wolf Mistress silver member
      October 27, 2008
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      will it be open a bit longer Tash?
      I'm not sure if I can manage this in two day's...

      Please