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Parachute

Chasing a cloud down to the sea,
You tug my strings
Digging deep into my linear flesh rubies.

I am ripped,
Your fingers pulling too tight on me
And my billowing mushroom

Tearing at the air,
My nails scratch at pockets
Of time and memory with

Vinegar in my escape-slashes,
This safety net garrotting me,
Constricting

The strum of tangled wire words cutting into
This deformed puppet
Mummified in a canvas shroud.

My fat crimson globules are spitting
In the face of frosty sky,
Staining the colour of purity.

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Amy-Lenna Bryce

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  • DramaQueen469
    October 25, 2008
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    WOW what an awesome write!! Thankyou so much for entering this piece!

    ~*~DramaQueen469~*~


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    October 24, 2008
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    this was something i mean it was a strong creative image you place in my mind, keep it flowing