Love is getting hurt
And feeling like dirt
Being a fool
And still acting cool
Yet love takes your last breath
Until your death
Love is believing lies
And looking in the eyes
Being very rude
And want love smooth
Come home kiss the dog
And she feels like a log
Love is when you awake
And still have heartache
Longing for his touch
Wishing he miss you that much
When it's too much pain
You go insane
Seeing him with a girl
Earthquakes your world
Seeing her with a boy
Takes away his joy
Then you both had a break
For love you cannot take
Please tell me what you think
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NICE
This is a very sweet poem... I liked it much.
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BRAVO
Love is believing lies
this was an exceptional piece..,great description love...
"Love is getting hurt
And feeling like dirt"
this is soo true ..
"Love is when you awake
And still have heartache
Longing for his touch
Wishing he miss you that much
When it's too much pain
You go insane"
absolutely....
Seeing him with a girl
Earthquakes your world
couldnt be MORE right !!
great work ...! -
Humm....very curious take you are here with showing the bitter scenario of this life and its truths around the words..very touching piece you have described..well done...
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i love your poem i hope you find your beautiful love
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