I sit alone as I cover my body and
soul, deep down i feel so cold &
as I try to speak My soul and My
Spirit feel very untold
Time and space I masterbate away
as I cry cause deep down death
wears its smile like a crown.
A contest entry
- - Beautiful Minds, Dark Addictions XII - by Arkbear.
400 points, ended October 28, 2008, 3 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
what feeling does it give you
Comments
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a sad poem here - very nicely penned, i am assuming it is not personal poetry though you never know
so often people think everything written by people is deeply personal, me, i think creativity. i like the 5th line, i think we all do that in the hope of a little pleasue in dark times, to relive the spirit - a good poem.
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Interesting take on this Prompt.....thank you so much for taking the time to enter.....good luck & God bless you!
Bear ~
95 out of 100!
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