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Wetlands

Stagnant
Weedy
Pools

Sluggish
Creeks

Walk
In
File

Thru
These
Woods

Doors
Open
To
Pristine
Lakes

In a list

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  • Heroesrox
    March 5

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    Short and to the subject. Makes me think I am there...lol. An awesome write! Tahks so much for the wonderful share! Best wishes!


    • Wolfdog silver member
      March 5
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      Thank you for your comments, compliments, and smiley. I do appreciate them.

  • meena krish
    January 13
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    Its like opening a magic door & in here we find
    nature's true beauty untouched by man. Another
    read that I liked!

    • Wolfdog silver member
      January 13
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      Thank you for your comment; compliment, and applause. I do appreciate them.

  • femurlee
    November 2, 2008

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    Nature has its ideosyncrasies but ,oh, are they divine. This is a nice neat piece. I shall bookmark this.


    • Wolfdog silver member
      January 13
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      Thank you for your comment, and compliment. I do appreciate them. I apologize for the late reply.


  • Exit-Stage-Right
    October 29, 2008
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    Very nice... sort of an American haiku... let's call it "Texacu"... three times larger than a normal haiku! Anyway, a nice placid walk in the woods.

    (We just got our first snow up here in Michigan, so the woods walking will be tapering down for a bit!)

    • Wolfdog silver member
      October 29, 2008
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      Thank you for your comments; compliments and applause. I do appreciate them.


  • Leonura
    October 29, 2008
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    Such a wondrous poem. truly something a reader could "walk" through.

    • Wolfdog silver member
      October 29, 2008
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      I thank you for your comments; compliments, and applause. I do appreciate.


  • bw43
    October 28, 2008

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    hmm... interesting structure... the centered single-word lines... it kind of makes me think of grass, just the shape and "Wetlands" and everglades type of scenary. interesting piece.

    • Wolfdog silver member
      October 28, 2008
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      Thank you for your thoughtful comments, and compliments. I do appreciate them.


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    October 28, 2008

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    Brilliant!!

    Wishing you best of luck in the contest!! Peace

    • Wolfdog silver member
      October 28, 2008
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      Thank you for your comments. And Peace, also to you.


  • Confusedboy
    October 27, 2008

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    Well done. reminds me of pathways through the dense woods, to that hidden lake. Enjoyable.


    • Wolfdog silver member
      October 27, 2008
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      Thank you, my friend, for your compliments; comment and applause. I do appreciate them.


  • Freak-in-BlackJeans
    October 24, 2008
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    This is ever so pretty! It reminds me of my favorite plant! Keep writing!

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