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Lost in your eyes

I've looked into you eyes
to see if i could find
the why and the reason
for being drawn off so deeply
into its gaze.
so easily i became lost within
thier cosmic like attraction.
also free from this endless sea of mohogany
i then become force into the brightest light
that stole my sight and left me blinded
I was reminded of the intense glare of the son,
but this was a smile that I had drowned in.
Brown skined figures, now emerge from the shadows
as picture perfect and painting of your countenance
upon fountains of Nubian beauty, you sit,
exquisit.

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