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this very moment...

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To look deep inside as I write.
My heart spills out like never before
And answers to questions
Lie in wait for trust to be shown

When all is torn from within
Where do we look for love?
Where do we cry our hearts out too?
When all seems lost

I’ll tell you where,
You look in your soul where it always was,
Where the courage to face up to pain,
Sits on the beat that pulses so strong.

Reflections of days past
Look back at tear filled eyes
And without conviction,
You fight back every one.

Keep it real and keep it true,
A heart is a soft life in another’s hands
Take care of it and it will grow
Weakness will fade from the touches felt.

That is what I feel right now, this very minute
As my heart yearns for realisation of compassion
To be understood completely
And unconditionally

Mine can only be so strong
Mine can only take so much
But it is strong enough to fight
And will never turn a loose from its place.

 

 

nor will it be left discarded like a piece of paper

born of thoughts unfounded

nor will the one that is held so tightly

but resurface, like a phoenix from the flames

 

not ashen or charred

but warmed with love

heated to feel alive

once more,,,forever.

 

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  • Heavens Child
    October 28, 2008

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    So much of how I feel about this piece has been said already. It's beautifully written. Best wishes and thank you for entering.


  • condor gold member
    October 25, 2008

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    This is a poem that makes one sit and listen to the silence within their own soul. You have done a beautiful job of putting these feeling across. Your poems are always filled with so much love and compassion, and questions that reveal the need for truth that you seek. I loved this very much. The quiet flow of the verses was well recieved and easy to understand. The pace was just right. Good luck in the contest.


  • Three Doves
    October 24, 2008

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    Sensitive to the inner voice you are heard and understood. Excellent Write! Thank you for sharing your heart.
    Peace in light and love
    Noah


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    October 24, 2008

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    such heart felt words from a heart that seems so heavy.such a delicate thing to hold in your hand the heart and the love of another.trust and understanding, to be seen for ones self, is all we ever ask for in the first place...your hemeoone loves you


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    October 24, 2008

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    Just amazing! This gives us such an insight into ther person you are within, although many of us know you as this caring, feeling person.
    Thank you for sharing yourself with us. Your passion just seeps from this piece.
    Gaylene


  • Cannonsfire
    October 24, 2008

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    You pour your heart onto this page and one cannot help but feel the beating in these words, may the answers you recieve be the ones you long to hear spoken. C


  • fortyninereasons gold member
    October 24, 2008
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    Bookmarked!

    Juls

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