This is my boundless reward, my holy grail, my impossible circus prize.
The solution to the greatest problem, the only one we have no control over,
It’s more bold than love, and more beautifull than life.
It’s your worst nightmare, whether you know it or not,
An inevitable silence that beckons you
All your pain, plagues, and anguish are nothing compared
The answers are all in there,
obstructed only by the turn of a key
No human (alive or dead), will turn it,, ever
Author notes
This should really get you thinking...
A contest entry
- Make me think! :) by raven-ink.
2100 points, ended October 27, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Return of The Cricket by B Chandler.
900 points, ended October 27, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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In a way you did make me think a little but not enough to make me want to delve deeper than what's being conveyed...
I'm torn with this decision but
...Semi-cricket -
It did make me think, thank you. The words were beautiful and chosen perfectly. It's not choppy, but it doesn't flow and a poem flows (not neseccarily usuing ryhme). But it is amazing and I am going to read it another time (this will be my fourth).
Thanks
Good luck
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