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Forgetting To Breath

Sometimes when I see myself in you
I get scared and find myself
Forgetting to breath

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  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    October 29, 2008
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    Forgetting to breathe, I have been here. An interesting poem and work in brevity. ~Pamela


    • Meej
      October 29, 2008

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      thank you again for your comment...I could probably maket his poem better with some editing..one day i'll get round to it


  • mysticstorm gold member
    October 24, 2008
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    Deep and sad...please check the rule...
    thank you,
    mystic

    • Meej
      October 27, 2008
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      I dont get what i did wrong in this one lady