The war rages within my soul
Evil spreading throughout
Thoughts of malice intensify
As my mind loses control
My heart becomes black
My blood courses cold
I am infatuated with thirst
A craving for flesh and pain
Brazen thoughts of slaughter
Are vexatious as I struggle
Powerless to prevail
Reluctant to concede
I envy death's reprieve
© 2008
Author notes
Option 3 - Word Bank 2
Taking Back Sunday x Panic At The Disco
A contest entry
- Do You Have What It Takes ? by just weak hands.
800 points, ended December 12, 2008, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Short and amazing. I love the song! Hehe. Awesome write and good luck in the contest! I wanted to enter this too, but I was too late!
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this was... nothing short of amazing. i love how you did underline the words in the wordbank. it sort of gave it more emphasis and depth. brilliant idea there :]
your poem was wonderfully dark, something i honestly love. it's impossible to have a favorite line here, because i just love it all. thanks so much for entering ! and actually reading the rules
so far, only like, one or two people have >.>...
best of luck !!
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