I sleep
in a dream escape
where whispers'
your name
Orion spins its stars
the hunter is lost
and I remain
in the deep of night
I sit upon
his constellation's husk
stardust is all I see
in a dream escape
And upon the night
we'll flee
in a dream escape
love whispers' your name
Stellar dream
and stardust
and loves' request
in a dream escape
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Moments such as these are memorable, it doesn't matter if we are wide awake or fast asleep, the magic leaves impressions of satisfaction to the soul who has found a dream come true and lends a longing fire to life that has yet to obtain that satisfaction. A beautiful write, very rich in imagery.
s and best wishes always... ~Genie~
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Beautiful write. I liked the flow of this poem. Beautiful imagery. This made me think of breaking away from the Earth for awhile and exploring the universe and of having hope for the future. That's what's so great about dreams. They can help us to escape our present worries and hopefully make us feel better about things. Thanks for sharing and keep that pen flowing.
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Hold tight to those beautiful bliss filled fantasy escapes! This is quite dreamy with soft whispers and stardust flowing through your words.You're becoming quite the accomplished master of great forms.I like this!
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Very very nice.. the wordings are all soo carefully chosen to give that 'dream-fantasy' effect Very well done
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