Dangle Dangle...Gorilla love song.

Open up your mind
And seee.........
there’s a bashful part
of meee..........
Hangin’ in the forest
Dangling from trees.

Your mattress monkey
giggling with gleee....
mere branches can not
(hide)
Sweee-test soul and mind

Come on…. baby
Sing along with me
un-abashed-ly…..

Our naked gorilla chorus:
WHO.O.O.U……..U!
WHO.O.O.U….U!

WHO.O.O.U……...U!
WHO.O.O.U… U!

Gently I sing unto

thee
Open up your soul
and see
a bashful part of we
hanging in forests

Dangling trees…

Heaven will provide
when we are willing
to surrender and dine.

It is our God forsaken right
To be loved..loved..loved.

Author notes

Special Dedication:
to my mattress monkey
And loving hubbs….Jerry!

REACH OUT THRU THOSE TREES
and GRASP LOVE MIGHTILY!!
(whoo..oo.U!)

Inspired by a song that tickled my spirit!
Jason Mraz - I'm Yours video:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EkHTsc9PU2A&feature=related

I'm in a total muse mood today!
I'll probably die reading this poem tomorrow!
(lol) i'm sure this is 10 lines!

pictures credits: yahoo images.com

A contest entry

For the love of my favorites! xo [BIG points] by Poetic Tasha. 2000 points, ended November 6, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

Please feel free to comment..it's how we all grow. How was my flow?

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natchstucco
November 5, 2008

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hey you, some fun lines being played out. matress monkey! cute lyrics. havent been at it in a while myself, i see you have not lost a step. great job .
celadia
October 25, 2008

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this is great. I mean that, it's funny and the rhythm is great with no words out of place, I hope you win in the contest.
gypsyfish
October 24, 2008

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OH MY GOODNESS!!!
i didn't really know what to expect! and i'm still not really sure... but i DO know about all of that 'danglin' around in the trees' stuff!!! been there a time or two myself... i liked all the --to the left side stuff--- ok? GOOD WRITE!!! love you.
love gypsyfish

P.S. nice picture. YOU NUT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! love gypsyfish
CountryCousin
October 24, 2008

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Cool.
I like this song and it is whimsical as well as funny. I am sorry that I can't dangle anymore because of old arthur and the ritis boys.
badnovocaine
October 24, 2008

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Ohhhhhhhh this was an incredably cute poem.
I loved your pictures that went with it. Are they pictures you took yourself?
Nice.
Poetic Tasha
October 24, 2008

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LMFAO ears, you're on F'n Crack!!!!
thanks so much for taking the time to enter you crazy woman! hmmm you really take give or take to a whole new limit lol.

best of luck

Tasha
faderman1959
October 24, 2008

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This was a riot! You've outdone yourself with this one! The pictures make it even more fun! Great fun!