It was nothing but such,
something that doesn't count as a big deal,
A definition of oneself as a loner,
something that sets me apart from the others.
The moment when a bond was formed,
an itchy feeling to break it at once,
a trauma on attachments,
or just the happiness on being solitary.
An intertwined finger with mine,
could have been very warm,
enticing, inviting, endearing,
but when things go on the way you like it,
be ready to fall apart...
again
Connections- we all have with each other,
an invisible thread of oneself to others,
but there are ties that are loose,
enough to break it again,
or maybe meant to be just that way.
Drowned by the norms,
of relationships enough to be a foundation,
for a deeper connection,
for a moment of intimacy,
but...
wouldn't it be better to be
alone,
with nothing to worry about,
no one to bring you up or down,
nobody to give you heartaches,
pain
I'm already tired on enduring it,
so please just leave me alone....
I can never hold on to you anymore...
A contest entry
- What Does The Song And Lyrics Mean To You? by hotchocolate.
550 points, ended November 2, 2008, 8 entries
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Comments
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Terrific poem
Strong emotion and a great ending -
I like this. Your a grand writer. Some parts could turn into a song, but i see it's from another contest from songs and lyrics. Thanks for entering! Good luck.
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This was written well and I enjoyed this read. Thank you for your entry
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