Ey ladies
you can make it whether you're with him
or your man's gone
so stand strong
keep ya head up
even though some of you
feel like you don't belong
on this earth
because you gave birth
to a beautiful little baby girl
who's barely hanging on
but still, stick with your child
don't abandon her
and have her wondering why
her mama left
stay close to your child
cause in the end you're gonna be blessed
yo miss, don't ever give up
cause you're a lioness...
[When you read my poems also check out the videos above them}
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You've lived much longer than your 18 years say you have. You have the heart and mind of our ancestors. Giving props to us ladies is one of the best things you can do. It says how much of a man you truly are. Thanks.
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This is very very different to the stuff I write, and usually read, but I like your ideas.
The last lines have such spirit and heart-felt concern. Very cool
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Grrrrrrr... I agree. I lived it. With a daughter and son to support working 5 part time jobs because they pay more than one 40 hour one. Cleaning other peoples messes 7 days a week averaging 12 to 16 hour work days. With my kids working when not in school,it taught them valueable life lessons. Hard,but honest. I had to maintain their respect most of all. Deserted by their father,no child support. Of the rearing kids type assistance nor money/child support. So yeah,Grrrr..!
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wow, this is a really great poem.
i really really liked this part
"cause in the end you're gonna be blessed
yo miss, don't ever give up
cause you're a lioness..."
this is a really great poem!!
please keep writing!
~SillyLily
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firstly i cannot check out the vids as im having trouble loading them..
this is an amazing peice of writting i love it, all women should see themselves as a lioness, the message in this poem sends out a strong vibe (from a womans point of veiw) you are very talented x
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love it... no matter what dnt loose hope!
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Great!
Powerful message written very well. I believe you have alot of knowledge for a man your age. I love Bob Marley ("Stir it up", "Buffalo Soldier", & "Everything's gonna be alright" are my personal favs), nice touch. Peace- Syah
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